The next part of your story focuses on the chase down the mountain with the beast. Please use lots of description and look closely at your characters emotions.
- Dadwaver sentence starters.
- Complex sentences. E.g Although she could not see anyone else around, Alesha was sure that she was not alone.
- Full stops, capital letters and commas.
- Wow words!
- Description, description, description. Focus less on having things happening and more on describing one scene.
- Describe the characters feelings and emotions.