Primary School

Relationships. Wellbeing. Achievement.


The next part of your story focuses on the chase down the mountain with the beast. Please use lots of description and look closely at your characters emotions.


Don't forget:


  • Dadwaver sentence starters.
  • Complex sentences. E.g Although she could not see anyone else around, Alesha was sure that she was not alone.
  • Full stops, capital letters and commas.
  • Wow words!
  • Description, description, description. Focus less on having things happening and more on describing one scene.
  • Describe the characters feelings and emotions.

Please have a look at the example below to help you with ideas.